Ray's draft:This is looking very good. The text is a little hard to see, though, maybe we could add a voice-over instead?Matthew's draft:Again, it looks very good, and the text is easier to read. I like that it has music, but we'll ahve to be careful about copyrights. Could we combine the two, like a general introduction first, followed by the specific info about ocean park? (ie. Matthew's, then Ray's?)
um.....i think it's a good idea.i will try to combine it tonight...and try to release before sunday...use Ray's at first...then use mine to be the second. and add Credits at the end, ok??
Ray's draft:
ReplyDeleteThis is looking very good. The text is a little hard to see, though, maybe we could add a voice-over instead?
Matthew's draft:
Again, it looks very good, and the text is easier to read. I like that it has music, but we'll ahve to be careful about copyrights.
Could we combine the two, like a general introduction first, followed by the specific info about ocean park? (ie. Matthew's, then Ray's?)
um.....i think it's a good idea.
ReplyDeletei will try to combine it tonight...and try to release before sunday...
use Ray's at first...then use mine to be the second. and add Credits at the end, ok??